English Literature
Poetic form and time
- 1.
Original invented poem 'Shift'. Preserve line breaks: 1 'Before the bell, we count the dark.' / 2 'Before the bell, we count the bread.' / 3 'Before the bell, the yard is still.' / 4 'After the bell,' / 5 'our names become the numbers on a sheet.' / 6 'One child writes hers across the factory wall.' No fixed metre is prescribed. Identify the repeated opening and explain one effect.
[2 marks] · no calculator - 2.
Original invented poem 'Shift'. Preserve line breaks: 1 'Before the bell, we count the dark.' / 2 'Before the bell, we count the bread.' / 3 'Before the bell, the yard is still.' / 4 'After the bell,' / 5 'our names become the numbers on a sheet.' / 6 'One child writes hers across the factory wall.' No fixed metre is prescribed. Explain the contrast between names and numbers.
[2 marks] · no calculator - 3.
Original invented poem 'Shift'. Preserve line breaks: 1 'Before the bell, we count the dark.' / 2 'Before the bell, we count the bread.' / 3 'Before the bell, the yard is still.' / 4 'After the bell,' / 5 'our names become the numbers on a sheet.' / 6 'One child writes hers across the factory wall.' No fixed metre is prescribed. Analyse the turn from Before to After.
[3 marks] · no calculator - 4.
Original invented poem 'Shift'. Preserve line breaks: 1 'Before the bell, we count the dark.' / 2 'Before the bell, we count the bread.' / 3 'Before the bell, the yard is still.' / 4 'After the bell,' / 5 'our names become the numbers on a sheet.' / 6 'One child writes hers across the factory wall.' No fixed metre is prescribed. How does the line break after 'After the bell,' shape the reading?
[3 marks] · no calculator - 5.
Original invented poem 'Shift'. Preserve line breaks: 1 'Before the bell, we count the dark.' / 2 'Before the bell, we count the bread.' / 3 'Before the bell, the yard is still.' / 4 'After the bell,' / 5 'our names become the numbers on a sheet.' / 6 'One child writes hers across the factory wall.' No fixed metre is prescribed. Evaluate whether the last line restores individuality.
[4 marks] · no calculator - 6.
Original invented poem 'Shift'. Preserve line breaks: 1 'Before the bell, we count the dark.' / 2 'Before the bell, we count the bread.' / 3 'Before the bell, the yard is still.' / 4 'After the bell,' / 5 'our names become the numbers on a sheet.' / 6 'One child writes hers across the factory wall.' No fixed metre is prescribed. Assess the claim that the poem's form imitates mechanical routine. Consider both repetition and disruption.
[4 marks] · no calculator
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