English Literature
Drama: power and silence
- 1.
Original invented scene: [A clerk stands beside a locked door. The governor sits.] GOVERNOR: You may speak freely. CLERK: About the missing wages? [The governor folds the list of names.] GOVERNOR: About the weather. [Silence. The clerk places a wet coat on the polished desk.] CLERK: It has reached indoors. Explain how the initial positions suggest hierarchy.
[2 marks] · no calculatorAnswer explanation
Draft walkthroughs are based on marking guidance, not independently verified derivations.
- The audience sees inequality before dialogue begins. Comfort belongs to the governor; the clerk's placement near a locked exit may make permission to speak feel conditional.
- Award each point once. Accept other well-supported interpretations addressing the task.
Marking points
- The seated governor contrasts with the standing clerk.
- The locked door suggests restricted movement or an intimidating setting.
Examiner tip: Stage space is evidence; do not assume a prison is specified.
- 2.
Original invented scene: [A clerk stands beside a locked door. The governor sits.] GOVERNOR: You may speak freely. CLERK: About the missing wages? [The governor folds the list of names.] GOVERNOR: About the weather. [Silence. The clerk places a wet coat on the polished desk.] CLERK: It has reached indoors. Why is 'You may speak freely' ironic in this scene?
[2 marks] · no calculatorAnswer explanation
Draft walkthroughs are based on marking guidance, not independently verified derivations.
- The next exchange tests and contradicts the promise. The irony comes from the gap between declared freedom and control of the topic.
- Award each point once. Accept other well-supported interpretations addressing the task.
Marking points
- The invitation promises unrestricted speech.
- The governor immediately restricts the subject to weather.
Examiner tip: Identify the contradiction in the exchange, not simply 'sarcasm'.
- 3.
Original invented scene: [A clerk stands beside a locked door. The governor sits.] GOVERNOR: You may speak freely. CLERK: About the missing wages? [The governor folds the list of names.] GOVERNOR: About the weather. [Silence. The clerk places a wet coat on the polished desk.] CLERK: It has reached indoors. Analyse the dramatic function of folding the list.
[3 marks] · no calculatorAnswer explanation
Draft walkthroughs are based on marking guidance, not independently verified derivations.
- The list embodies information that the governor can physically control. Folding it during the clerk's question turns an ordinary action into a possible act of suppression.
- Award each point once. Accept other well-supported interpretations addressing the task.
Marking points
- The prop gives missing wages a connection to named people.
- Folding can conceal or dismiss their claims.
- The gesture interrupts discussion visually without needing an explicit refusal.
Examiner tip: Explain the timing of the gesture as well as the prop itself.
- 4.
Original invented scene: [A clerk stands beside a locked door. The governor sits.] GOVERNOR: You may speak freely. CLERK: About the missing wages? [The governor folds the list of names.] GOVERNOR: About the weather. [Silence. The clerk places a wet coat on the polished desk.] CLERK: It has reached indoors. Explain two possible performance choices for the silence and their different effects.
[3 marks] · no calculatorAnswer explanation
Draft walkthroughs are based on marking guidance, not independently verified derivations.
- The written silence does not prescribe a single emotion. Blocking and duration can make the coat a hesitant protest or a challenge, while preserving the same words.
- Award each point once. Accept other well-supported interpretations addressing the task.
Marking points
- Explains one playable choice and its supported effect, such as a long pause suggesting fear.
- Explains a second distinct playable choice and its supported effect, such as a held stare suggesting resistance.
- Compares how the choices change the transition from verbal censorship to physical action.
Examiner tip: Offer playable choices, not new dialogue or altered stage directions.
- 5.
Original invented scene: [A clerk stands beside a locked door. The governor sits.] GOVERNOR: You may speak freely. CLERK: About the missing wages? [The governor folds the list of names.] GOVERNOR: About the weather. [Silence. The clerk places a wet coat on the polished desk.] CLERK: It has reached indoors. Evaluate whether the final line is a successful challenge to the governor.
[4 marks] · no calculatorAnswer explanation
Draft walkthroughs are based on marking guidance, not independently verified derivations.
- The clerk uses the permitted subject to breach the boundary the governor created. This is rhetorically resourceful, but the scene ends before showing whether authority changes course.
- Award each point once. Accept other well-supported interpretations addressing the task.
Marking points
- It obeys the weather topic superficially.
- The wet coat brings an external problem onto the governor's desk.
- 'indoors' can suggest that exclusion of hardship has failed.
- Distinguishes symbolic challenge from an outcome: no wage payment or response is shown.
Examiner tip: A strong last line does not prove political victory.
- 6.
Original invented scene: [A clerk stands beside a locked door. The governor sits.] GOVERNOR: You may speak freely. CLERK: About the missing wages? [The governor folds the list of names.] GOVERNOR: About the weather. [Silence. The clerk places a wet coat on the polished desk.] CLERK: It has reached indoors. Assess how the scene invites an audience to judge authority through objects as well as speech.
[4 marks] · no calculatorAnswer explanation
Draft walkthroughs are based on marking guidance, not independently verified derivations.
- The desk, paper and coat make a conflict of power visible. The governor controls language and records, while the clerk introduces a material trace that cannot be kept outside simply by changing the topic.
- Award each point once. Accept other well-supported interpretations addressing the task.
Marking points
- The locked door materialises control of access or exit.
- The folded list links verbal evasion with control of evidence.
- The coat disrupts the polished desk's protected order.
- Synthesises these actions with the false promise of free speech into an audience judgement.
Examiner tip: Discuss what spectators see; a play is not only a transcript.
Marking points are indicative, not an official mark scheme. Accept equivalent valid methods and supported interpretations that address the task; award each mark once without requiring the model wording.