IB · ENG A LANG LIT HL

English A: Language & Literature HL

The HL Essay: sustained literary analysis — HL Essay

Name: ____________________Date: October 2, 2026

1.
Explain what distinguishes the HL Essay from a standard literary commentary, with particular reference to the requirement for a sustained 'line of inquiry' developed across the whole essay.
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Marking points
- Explains that a standard commentary typically responds to a given, specific extract or guiding question, while the HL Essay requires the student to independently formulate their own focused line of inquiry into a self-chosen aspect of a single studied work.
- Explains that 'sustained' means the same central argument or question must be developed and revisited across the entire essay, rather than the essay drifting between several loosely related observations.
- Explains that this requires careful planning before writing: selecting a line of inquiry narrow enough to sustain in depth, but rich enough to generate substantial analysis across the full word count.
- Explains that, unlike a commentary responding to an externally set prompt, the HL Essay also assesses the student's independent capacity to identify what is worth investigating in a text in the first place.
Examiner tip: The HL Essay's defining challenge is self-direction: the student, not an examiner-set question, must identify a line of inquiry precise enough to sustain focused analysis across 1,200 to 1,500 words.
2.
Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “Explain what distinguishes the HL Essay from a standard literary commentary, with particular reference to the requirement for a sustained 'line of inquiry' developed across the whole essay.” Their response addresses only this point: “Explains that a standard commentary typically responds to a given, specific extract or guiding question, while the HL Essay requires the student to independently formulate their own focused line of inquiry into a self-chosen aspect of a single studied work.” Evaluate the response against the complete 4-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[4 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: Explains that a standard commentary typically responds to a given, specific extract or guiding question, while the HL Essay requires the student to independently formulate their own focused line of inquiry into a self-chosen aspect of a single studied work.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that 'sustained' means the same central argument or question must be developed and revisited across the entire essay, rather than the essay drifting between several loosely related observations.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that this requires careful planning before writing: selecting a line of inquiry narrow enough to sustain in depth, but rich enough to generate substantial analysis across the full word count.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that, unlike a commentary responding to an externally set prompt, the HL Essay also assesses the student's independent capacity to identify what is worth investigating in a text in the first place.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
3.
A student is planning an HL Essay on a novel and proposes the line of inquiry: 'How does the author use weather in the novel?' Explain why this line of inquiry is too broad, and suggest a more focused alternative.
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Marking points
- Explains that 'how does the author use weather' invites a descriptive catalogue of every weather reference in the novel, rather than a focused argument, risking a list-like essay without a clear central claim.
- Explains that a strong line of inquiry needs a specific angle or claim to argue for, not just a topic to survey.
- Suggests a more focused alternative, such as 'To what extent does the recurring storm imagery in [the novel] foreshadow and externalize the protagonist's psychological unraveling?' which narrows the topic to a specific pattern (storms, not all weather) and a specific interpretive claim (foreshadowing and externalizing psychological state).
Examiner tip: A good test for a line of inquiry: could someone reasonably disagree with it, or is it simply a neutral description of a topic? 'How does X use Y' usually fails this test; 'To what extent does X's use of Y achieve Z' usually passes it.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “A student is planning an HL Essay on a novel and proposes the line of inquiry: 'How does the author use weather in the novel?' Explain why this line of inquiry is too broad, and suggest a more focused alternative.” Their response addresses only this point: “Explains that 'how does the author use weather' invites a descriptive catalogue of every weather reference in the novel, rather than a focused argument, risking a list-like essay without a clear central claim.” Evaluate the response against the complete 3-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: Explains that 'how does the author use weather' invites a descriptive catalogue of every weather reference in the novel, rather than a focused argument, risking a list-like essay without a clear central claim.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that a strong line of inquiry needs a specific angle or claim to argue for, not just a topic to survey.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Suggests a more focused alternative, such as 'To what extent does the recurring storm imagery in [the novel] foreshadow and externalize the protagonist's psychological unraveling?' which narrows the topic to a specific pattern (storms, not all weather) and a specific interpretive claim (foreshadowing and externalizing psychological state).
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
5.
Explain why an HL Essay should engage with counter-evidence or complicating moments in the text (places where the chosen line of inquiry does not perfectly hold), rather than only presenting evidence that supports the student's argument.
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Marking points
- Explains that selectively presenting only supporting evidence risks oversimplifying the text and can come across as a one-sided or unconvincing reading to an examiner familiar with the full work.
- Explains that acknowledging and addressing a complicating moment demonstrates a more sophisticated, nuanced understanding of the text's complexity, which is specifically rewarded at HL.
- Explains that successfully explaining why a complicating moment does not actually undermine the overall line of inquiry (or refining the argument to account for it) strengthens, rather than weakens, the essay's central claim.
Examiner tip: Addressing a counterexample is not the same as undermining your own argument — a well-handled complication, resolved through careful analysis, is one of the clearest signals of genuine critical sophistication to an examiner.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “Explain why an HL Essay should engage with counter-evidence or complicating moments in the text (places where the chosen line of inquiry does not perfectly hold), rather than only presenting evidence that supports the student's argument.” Their response addresses only this point: “Explains that selectively presenting only supporting evidence risks oversimplifying the text and can come across as a one-sided or unconvincing reading to an examiner familiar with the full work.” Evaluate the response against the complete 3-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: Explains that selectively presenting only supporting evidence risks oversimplifying the text and can come across as a one-sided or unconvincing reading to an examiner familiar with the full work.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that acknowledging and addressing a complicating moment demonstrates a more sophisticated, nuanced understanding of the text's complexity, which is specifically rewarded at HL.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that successfully explaining why a complicating moment does not actually undermine the overall line of inquiry (or refining the argument to account for it) strengthens, rather than weakens, the essay's central claim.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
7.
A student has written an HL Essay introduction that states: 'This essay will discuss symbolism in the novel.' Explain why this introduction is insufficient for the HL Essay's requirements, and state two elements a stronger introduction should include.
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Marking points
- Explains that this introduction only announces a general topic (symbolism) rather than stating a specific, arguable line of inquiry or claim, giving the reader no sense of the essay's actual direction or purpose.
- States that a stronger introduction should include a specific, focused thesis or line of inquiry (stating what the essay will argue, not just what it will discuss).
- States that a stronger introduction should also briefly indicate the scope or method of the analysis (for example, which specific symbols or sections of the text will be examined), giving the reader a roadmap for the essay that follows.
Examiner tip: A useful check for any essay introduction: could the exact same sentence introduce a completely different essay on the same topic? If so, it states a topic, not a thesis, and needs to be sharpened into an arguable claim.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “A student has written an HL Essay introduction that states: 'This essay will discuss symbolism in the novel.' Explain why this introduction is insufficient for the HL Essay's requirements, and state two elements a stronger introduction should include.” Their response addresses only this point: “Explains that this introduction only announces a general topic (symbolism) rather than stating a specific, arguable line of inquiry or claim, giving the reader no sense of the essay's actual direction or purpose.” Evaluate the response against the complete 3-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: Explains that this introduction only announces a general topic (symbolism) rather than stating a specific, arguable line of inquiry or claim, giving the reader no sense of the essay's actual direction or purpose.
- Identifies the missing requirement: States that a stronger introduction should include a specific, focused thesis or line of inquiry (stating what the essay will argue, not just what it will discuss).
- Identifies the missing requirement: States that a stronger introduction should also briefly indicate the scope or method of the analysis (for example, which specific symbols or sections of the text will be examined), giving the reader a roadmap for the essay that follows.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
9.
State two criteria a student should use when choosing a literary work for the HL Essay, and explain why each matters.
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Marking points
- States and explains that the work should be rich enough to sustain close analysis across 1,200 to 1,500 words, with varied techniques to discuss.
- States and explains that the student should have a genuine interest in and detailed knowledge of the work, enabling an independent, insightful line of inquiry.
- Notes that the work must also be one studied in the course, as the essay is on a studied literary text.
Examiner tip: A strong choice balances richness, personal knowledge and course eligibility.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “State two criteria a student should use when choosing a literary work for the HL Essay, and explain why each matters.” Their response addresses only this point: “States and explains that the work should be rich enough to sustain close analysis across 1,200 to 1,500 words, with varied techniques to discuss.” Evaluate the response against the complete 3-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: States and explains that the work should be rich enough to sustain close analysis across 1,200 to 1,500 words, with varied techniques to discuss.
- Identifies the missing requirement: States and explains that the student should have a genuine interest in and detailed knowledge of the work, enabling an independent, insightful line of inquiry.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Notes that the work must also be one studied in the course, as the essay is on a studied literary text.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
11.
Explain how engaging with a critical perspective or literary conversation can strengthen an HL Essay without replacing the student's own analysis.
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Marking points
- Explains that a critical perspective can frame the line of inquiry and show awareness of how the work has been read.
- Explains that the student should use the perspective as a lens, testing it against textual evidence rather than quoting critics as authority.
- Explains that the strongest essays agree, qualify or challenge the perspective through their own close reading.
Examiner tip: Use secondary ideas to sharpen your own argument, never to replace it.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “Explain how engaging with a critical perspective or literary conversation can strengthen an HL Essay without replacing the student's own analysis.” Their response addresses only this point: “Explains that a critical perspective can frame the line of inquiry and show awareness of how the work has been read.” Evaluate the response against the complete 3-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: Explains that a critical perspective can frame the line of inquiry and show awareness of how the work has been read.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that the student should use the perspective as a lens, testing it against textual evidence rather than quoting critics as authority.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that the strongest essays agree, qualify or challenge the perspective through their own close reading.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
13.
Explain how a body paragraph in an HL Essay can be structured so that each paragraph advances the line of inquiry.
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Marking points
- Explains that a paragraph should open with a clear claim linked to the line of inquiry.
- Explains that it should then present precise textual evidence and analyse the writer's techniques and their effects.
- Explains that the paragraph should end by linking back to the argument, showing its contribution to the overall inquiry.
Examiner tip: Claim, evidence, analysis, link: every paragraph should visibly move the argument forward.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “Explain how a body paragraph in an HL Essay can be structured so that each paragraph advances the line of inquiry.” Their response addresses only this point: “Explains that a paragraph should open with a clear claim linked to the line of inquiry.” Evaluate the response against the complete 3-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: Explains that a paragraph should open with a clear claim linked to the line of inquiry.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that it should then present precise textual evidence and analyse the writer's techniques and their effects.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that the paragraph should end by linking back to the argument, showing its contribution to the overall inquiry.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
15.
Distinguish between a quotation that is 'dropped in' and one that is effectively embedded and analysed in an HL Essay.
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Marking points
- States that a dropped-in quotation is placed without introduction or comment, leaving the reader to infer its relevance.
- States that an embedded quotation is integrated grammatically into the writer's sentence and kept short and precise.
- States that effective analysis follows by commenting on specific words or techniques and their effect on meaning.
Examiner tip: A quotation is evidence only when it is analysed; never leave it to speak for itself.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “Distinguish between a quotation that is 'dropped in' and one that is effectively embedded and analysed in an HL Essay.” Their response addresses only this point: “States that a dropped-in quotation is placed without introduction or comment, leaving the reader to infer its relevance.” Evaluate the response against the complete 3-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: States that a dropped-in quotation is placed without introduction or comment, leaving the reader to infer its relevance.
- Identifies the missing requirement: States that an embedded quotation is integrated grammatically into the writer's sentence and kept short and precise.
- Identifies the missing requirement: States that effective analysis follows by commenting on specific words or techniques and their effect on meaning.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
17.
Explain how a student can use the historical or cultural context of a work in an HL Essay without letting the essay become a history essay.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Explains that context should be selected only where it illuminates a specific authorial choice in the text.
- Explains that it should be brief and always tied back to textual evidence and analysis of effect.
- Explains that the focus must remain on how the writer's choices create meaning, not on narrating background.
Examiner tip: Context is a tool for interpreting the text, not a replacement for textual analysis.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “Explain how a student can use the historical or cultural context of a work in an HL Essay without letting the essay become a history essay.” Their response addresses only this point: “Explains that context should be selected only where it illuminates a specific authorial choice in the text.” Evaluate the response against the complete 3-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: Explains that context should be selected only where it illuminates a specific authorial choice in the text.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that it should be brief and always tied back to textual evidence and analysis of effect.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that the focus must remain on how the writer's choices create meaning, not on narrating background.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
19.
State two things an effective conclusion to an HL Essay should do, and one thing it should avoid.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- States that it should answer the line of inquiry directly, synthesizing the main points of the argument.
- States that it should offer a final insight about the significance of the findings for understanding the work.
- States that it should avoid introducing wholly new evidence or arguments.
Examiner tip: A conclusion closes the argument by answering the inquiry, not by repeating or opening new threads.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “State two things an effective conclusion to an HL Essay should do, and one thing it should avoid.” Their response addresses only this point: “States that it should answer the line of inquiry directly, synthesizing the main points of the argument.” Evaluate the response against the complete 3-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: States that it should answer the line of inquiry directly, synthesizing the main points of the argument.
- Identifies the missing requirement: States that it should offer a final insight about the significance of the findings for understanding the work.
- Identifies the missing requirement: States that it should avoid introducing wholly new evidence or arguments.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
21.
Explain two strategies for managing the 1,200 to 1,500 word limit in an HL Essay.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Explains that planning a limited number of well-developed points (rather than many shallow ones) fits depth into the word count.
- Explains that cutting plot summary, repetition and long quotations frees words for analysis.
- Notes that drafting and trimming helps keep each sentence purposeful.
Examiner tip: Concision is part of quality: every sentence should do analytical work.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “Explain two strategies for managing the 1,200 to 1,500 word limit in an HL Essay.” Their response addresses only this point: “Explains that planning a limited number of well-developed points (rather than many shallow ones) fits depth into the word count.” Evaluate the response against the complete 3-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: Explains that planning a limited number of well-developed points (rather than many shallow ones) fits depth into the word count.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that cutting plot summary, repetition and long quotations frees words for analysis.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Notes that drafting and trimming helps keep each sentence purposeful.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
23.
Explain why plot summary weakens an HL Essay and how a student can replace it with analysis.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Explains that summary retells what happens, which the reader already knows, and does not show interpretation or evaluation.
- Explains that analysis asks how and why a technique creates an effect, so each event mentioned should serve an argument.
- Explains that a student can shift by replacing 'then X happens' with 'the writer chooses X in order to...'.
Examiner tip: Replace 'what happens' with 'what the writer's choice achieves'.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “Explain why plot summary weakens an HL Essay and how a student can replace it with analysis.” Their response addresses only this point: “Explains that summary retells what happens, which the reader already knows, and does not show interpretation or evaluation.” Evaluate the response against the complete 3-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: Explains that summary retells what happens, which the reader already knows, and does not show interpretation or evaluation.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that analysis asks how and why a technique creates an effect, so each event mentioned should serve an argument.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that a student can shift by replacing 'then X happens' with 'the writer chooses X in order to...'.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
25.
Three candidate lines of inquiry are: (A) 'The theme of loss in the novel'; (B) 'How the novel shows loss'; (C) 'To what extent does the fragmented narrative structure of the novel enact the protagonist's experience of grief?' Evaluate which is strongest and why.
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Marking points
- Identifies C as the strongest line of inquiry.
- Explains that A is a topic, not an arguable question, and B is too broad and descriptive.
- Explains that C names a specific technique (narrative fragmentation) and an interpretive claim (enacting grief), allowing focused, evidence-based argument.
- Notes that 'to what extent' invites evaluation and qualification.
Examiner tip: A good line of inquiry is narrow, arguable and rooted in the writer's choices.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “Three candidate lines of inquiry are: (A) 'The theme of loss in the novel'; (B) 'How the novel shows loss'; (C) 'To what extent does the fragmented narrative structure of the novel enact the protagonist's experience of grief?' Evaluate which is strongest and why.” Their response addresses only this point: “Identifies C as the strongest line of inquiry.” Evaluate the response against the complete 4-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[4 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: Identifies C as the strongest line of inquiry.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that A is a topic, not an arguable question, and B is too broad and descriptive.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that C names a specific technique (narrative fragmentation) and an interpretive claim (enacting grief), allowing focused, evidence-based argument.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Notes that 'to what extent' invites evaluation and qualification.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
27.
Explain why an HL Essay should focus on the author's choices in the text rather than on the author's biography.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Explains that the essay assesses analysis of how meaning is created through language, structure and technique in the work itself.
- Explains that biography can only be speculative about intention and can lead to claims that the text itself does not support.
- Explains that biographical details are acceptable only when they illuminate a specific textual choice.
Examiner tip: Argue from the text: what the words do matters more than what the author might have meant.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “Explain why an HL Essay should focus on the author's choices in the text rather than on the author's biography.” Their response addresses only this point: “Explains that the essay assesses analysis of how meaning is created through language, structure and technique in the work itself.” Evaluate the response against the complete 3-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: Explains that the essay assesses analysis of how meaning is created through language, structure and technique in the work itself.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that biography can only be speculative about intention and can lead to claims that the text itself does not support.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that biographical details are acceptable only when they illuminate a specific textual choice.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.
29.
An essay lists seven techniques from a novel in separate paragraphs, with a sentence on each. Explain two changes that would improve it.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Explains that the writer should select two or three techniques and analyse them in depth, since depth outweighs breadth.
- Explains that the techniques should be organised around a single line of inquiry, linking them into one argument rather than isolated observations.
- Explains that each point needs precise quotations with analysis of effect, not just identification of the device.
Examiner tip: Feature-spotting is not analysis: always explain the effect and connect it to the argument.
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Marking analysis: A learner attempts the following task: “An essay lists seven techniques from a novel in separate paragraphs, with a sentence on each. Explain two changes that would improve it.” Their response addresses only this point: “Explains that the writer should select two or three techniques and analyse them in depth, since depth outweighs breadth.” Evaluate the response against the complete 3-mark task. Identify what earns credit and state every additional requirement needed for full marks.
[3 marks] · no calculator
Marking points
- Recognises credit for the stated point: Explains that the writer should select two or three techniques and analyse them in depth, since depth outweighs breadth.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that the techniques should be organised around a single line of inquiry, linking them into one argument rather than isolated observations.
- Identifies the missing requirement: Explains that each point needs precise quotations with analysis of effect, not just identification of the device.
Examiner tip: Treat each marking point as a separate requirement. Do not award the same idea twice, and do not infer work the learner did not show.