First Language English
Directed writing and composition — Paper 2
- 1.
A school is considering replacing printed notices with a mobile app. One student argues that alerts are faster and reduce paper; another warns that not every family has reliable internet and notifications are easily ignored. Write the opening of a letter to the principal that evaluates both views and states your position.
[4 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Uses an appropriate formal letter voice and addresses the principal.
- Develops the speed or environmental advantage rather than merely repeating it.
- Develops the access or attention concern with a plausible consequence.
- States a clear, reasoned position or practical compromise.
Examiner tip: Transform the source ideas for your audience; evaluation requires judgement, not summary alone.
- 2.
Write the opening of a descriptive composition entitled ‘After the Crowd Had Gone’. Establish a clear place and atmosphere without explaining the earlier event directly.
[4 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Establishes a specific setting through selected sensory detail.
- Creates a consistent atmosphere appropriate to the title.
- Suggests the absent crowd indirectly through traces or contrast.
- Uses controlled vocabulary and sentence structure for deliberate effect.
Examiner tip: Choose a few precise details and organise them; description is stronger than a catalogue of adjectives.
- 3.
A magazine invites readers to submit articles on ‘A Skill Every Teenager Should Learn’. Write the opening paragraphs of your article, establishing your chosen skill and your viewpoint.
[3 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Identifies a specific, clearly named skill rather than a vague category.
- Establishes a clear personal viewpoint on why this skill matters.
- Uses a register and tone appropriate to a magazine article aimed at teenage readers.
Examiner tip: An article voice is more personal and engaging than a formal letter, but still organised around a clear line of argument.
- 4.
Write the opening of a speech to be given to your school, persuading students to take part in a new recycling scheme.
[3 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Opens with a technique designed to capture a listening audience's attention, such as a question or striking statement.
- Addresses the audience directly, appropriate to a spoken speech.
- States the scheme being proposed and one clear reason to support it.
Examiner tip: A speech is heard, not read — favour direct address, rhetorical questions and clear signposting over dense written prose.
- 5.
Write the opening of a narrative composition that begins with the line: ‘By the time I noticed the door was open, it was already too late.’
[3 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Continues directly and plausibly from the given opening line.
- Establishes a clear narrative voice and immediate sense of tension or unease.
- Uses narrative techniques such as pacing or implication rather than explaining events directly.
Examiner tip: A strong narrative opening raises a question in the reader's mind that makes them want to continue reading.
- 6.
Write a short formal report to a youth club committee recommending one change to improve attendance at weekly meetings.
[3 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Uses an appropriate formal report structure, such as a clear heading and organised points.
- States one specific, practical recommendation rather than a vague suggestion.
- Supports the recommendation with a plausible reason linked to improving attendance.
Examiner tip: A report is organised and impersonal in tone, structured around clear points rather than a flowing personal narrative.
- 7.
Continue this composition opening in a consistent voice: ‘The old house had been empty for years, yet tonight, for the first time, a light flickered in the upstairs window.’
[3 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Maintains the same tense and narrative voice established in the opening line.
- Builds on the mystery or tension already created, rather than resolving it immediately.
- Uses descriptive or sensory detail consistent with the eerie tone of the opening.
Examiner tip: Match the tense, person and tone of the given opening exactly before adding your own ideas.
- 8.
Write the opening of a letter to a local newspaper arguing that your town needs more cycle lanes. State your position clearly and give one supporting reason.
[3 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Clearly states a position in favour of more cycle lanes.
- Develops one supporting reason with some specific detail, rather than a bare assertion.
- Uses a tone and structure appropriate for a persuasive letter intended for publication.
Examiner tip: A persuasive letter to a newspaper should sound confident and public-facing, not like a private note to a friend.
- 9.
Write the opening of a formal letter of complaint to a company about a faulty product you purchased, stating what went wrong.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Identifies the product and states clearly what the fault or problem was.
- Uses a formal, controlled tone appropriate for a complaint, avoiding an overly emotional or aggressive register.
Examiner tip: A formal complaint is most effective when it states the problem factually and calmly, saving any specific request for later in the letter.
- 10.
Write the opening of a discursive essay on the question: ‘Should students be allowed to use mobile phones in school?’ Introduce both sides of the debate.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Introduces the topic in a balanced, even-handed way, without immediately revealing a one-sided personal opinion.
- Signals that both sides of the argument will be considered, using appropriate discursive language (e.g. ‘on one hand... on the other hand’).
Examiner tip: A discursive essay opening should sound balanced and exploratory, saving a strong personal conclusion for later in the essay.
- 11.
Write the opening of an informative article giving beginners advice on how to start growing vegetables at home.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Establishes a clear, helpful, informative tone suitable for a how-to guide.
- Introduces the topic in a way that is encouraging and accessible to a genuine beginner.
Examiner tip: Informative writing for beginners should avoid jargon and assume no prior knowledge of the topic.
- 12.
Write a diary entry in the voice of a character who has just moved to a new country and is feeling both excited and anxious.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Establishes a convincing, consistent first-person voice for the character.
- Conveys both excitement and anxiety, rather than only one of the two emotions.
Examiner tip: A diary entry should sound like private, honest reflection, with mixed or conflicting feelings expressed naturally.
- 13.
Write a short dialogue exchange between two characters who disagree about whether to report a friend's mistake to a teacher.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Gives each character a distinct, consistent viewpoint on the disagreement.
- Uses natural-sounding dialogue, correctly punctuated, that reveals the characters' differing attitudes.
Examiner tip: Effective dialogue reveals character through what is said and how, not through the narrator explaining each person's opinion directly.
- 14.
Write the opening of an opinion column arguing that public libraries are more important today than ever before.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- States a clear, confident opinion early in the piece.
- Uses a compelling hook or example to draw the reader into the argument.
Examiner tip: An opinion column should state its position confidently from the start, unlike a discursive essay, which deliberately withholds a firm opinion until later.
- 15.
Write the opening of a leaflet encouraging local residents to take part in a neighbourhood clean-up day.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Uses an engaging, persuasive opening appropriate for a leaflet aimed at the general public.
- Clearly states the purpose of the event and gives a reason to take part.
Examiner tip: Leaflet writing is typically concise and punchy, using short sentences or sub-headings to grab attention quickly.
- 16.
Write the opening of a review of a film you have recently watched, giving your first impression.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Establishes a clear personal viewpoint or first impression of the film.
- Uses a tone appropriate for a review, balancing personal voice with critical judgement.
Examiner tip: A review opening should hook the reader with a clear impression, saving detailed justification for the body of the review.
- 17.
Write the opening of an eyewitness account describing a dramatic event you witnessed (real or imagined), such as a minor accident in a busy street.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Establishes the writer as a credible, present witness to the event.
- Uses specific, concrete sensory detail to make the account feel immediate and believable.
Examiner tip: An eyewitness account should feel immediate and specific, as if the writer is recalling exactly what they personally saw and heard.
- 18.
Write a short public announcement to be read aloud at a train station, informing passengers of a significant delay and apologising for the inconvenience.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Clearly states the key information: that there is a delay.
- Includes an appropriate apology and tone of professional reassurance suitable for a public announcement.
Examiner tip: A public announcement must be clear and concise, since listeners only hear it once and cannot re-read it.
- 19.
Write the opening of a formal letter applying for a part-time weekend job at a local shop, introducing yourself and your interest in the role.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Introduces the writer clearly and states the specific position being applied for.
- Uses a formal, professional tone appropriate for a job application.
Examiner tip: A job application letter should be formal and specific, naming the exact role rather than writing generally about wanting a job.
- 20.
Write the opening of a blog post sharing your experience of trying a new hobby for the first time.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Establishes a personal, engaging and conversational blog voice.
- Introduces the hobby and gives an honest first impression of trying it.
Examiner tip: Blog writing is typically informal and personal, written as if speaking directly and honestly to an interested reader.
- 21.
Write the opening of promotional copy for a new café, designed to make it sound appealing to potential customers.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Uses vivid, appealing language designed to attract potential customers.
- Highlights a specific, appealing feature of the café rather than only vague general praise.
Examiner tip: Promotional writing should sound enthusiastic and specific, giving a concrete reason to visit rather than empty praise.
- 22.
Write the opening of a tribute speech celebrating the achievements of a retiring teacher at your school.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Establishes a warm, respectful and appreciative tone suitable for a tribute.
- Refers to a specific quality or achievement of the teacher, rather than only generic praise.
Examiner tip: A tribute speech is most moving when it uses specific, personal details rather than only broad, generic compliments.
- 23.
Write the opening of a formal letter to a local council requesting that a new pedestrian crossing be installed near a school.
[2 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Clearly states the specific request: a new pedestrian crossing near the school.
- Gives a clear, relevant reason supporting the request, such as safety for schoolchildren.
Examiner tip: A formal request letter should state exactly what is being asked for early on, then justify it with relevant reasons.
- 24.
Write the opening paragraphs of a short story that begins with a character discovering an old, locked box in their grandmother's attic.
[3 marks] · no calculatorMarking points
- Establishes a clear setting and atmosphere appropriate to the discovery.
- Creates intrigue about the box's contents without revealing them, encouraging the reader to want to continue.
- Uses narrative techniques (such as sensory detail or pacing) rather than simply stating facts about the box.
Examiner tip: A mysterious object is most effective as a hook when its contents are withheld, giving the reader a question they want answered.